Comments on: Artist Spotlite – Randall Jordan http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan Free art lessons & tips on a variety of different mediums including oil painting,watercolor,acrylics and more! Tue, 07 Feb 2012 17:28:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Brooke Young http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan/comment-page-1#comment-2538 Brooke Young Tue, 26 Aug 2008 11:29:26 +0000 http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan#comment-2538 A beautiful piece. Wonderful work with tones. Love the breaking waves. A beautiful piece. Wonderful work with tones. Love the breaking waves.

]]> By: Ingrid http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan/comment-page-1#comment-2268 Ingrid Thu, 14 Aug 2008 18:51:49 +0000 http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan#comment-2268 Hi Randall, You have captured the sound and excitement felt at the beach in this painting! You did a great job capturing the water and all of the movement. Just a thought about the composition.....I agree with Norman Simms that a stronger composition would be had if two of the girls could be connected, maybe holding hands, and the other girl by herself. There is equal distance between each girl and by connecting two of them it would create more interest in the negative space. One other thought would be to maybe not have so much wave action so that we can see more of the girls. I put my finger over the blue sky and ocean shape in the upper part of your painting, to block it out. Do you think that this shape is necessary? I think that this painting is quite powerful without that dark blue shape! Just a thought! Very nice work and great EMOTION! Thanks for sharing! Ingrid ;-) Hi Randall,

You have captured the sound and excitement felt at the beach in this painting! You did a great job capturing the water and all of the movement.

Just a thought about the composition…..I agree with Norman Simms that a stronger composition would be had if two of the girls could be connected, maybe holding hands, and the other girl by herself. There is equal distance between each girl and by connecting two of them it would create more interest in the negative space. One other thought would be to maybe not have so much wave action so that we can see more of the girls.

I put my finger over the blue sky and ocean shape in the upper part of your painting, to block it out. Do you think that this shape is necessary? I think that this painting is quite powerful without that dark blue shape! Just a thought!

Very nice work and great EMOTION! Thanks for sharing!

Ingrid ;-)

]]> By: Gill http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan/comment-page-1#comment-2126 Gill Fri, 08 Aug 2008 15:26:23 +0000 http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan#comment-2126 Lovely painting..very natural. Lovely painting..very natural.

]]> By: Cindi Picou http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan/comment-page-1#comment-2049 Cindi Picou Tue, 05 Aug 2008 03:51:31 +0000 http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan#comment-2049 what a delightful moment, and you captured it very well. I feel their excitement. I can almost hear the waves and the wind. Thanks for this moment in time! what a delightful moment, and you captured it very well. I feel their excitement. I can almost hear the waves and the wind. Thanks for this moment in time!

]]> By: Jayne Cummins http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan/comment-page-1#comment-1939 Jayne Cummins Fri, 01 Aug 2008 04:34:44 +0000 http://www.artinstructionblog.com/artist-spotlite-randall-jordan#comment-1939 Randall - you have certainly captured the moment, a little excitement but also a little fear. The little girls are a delight and the reflections excellent. Well done. Jayne Randall – you have certainly captured the moment, a little excitement but also a little fear. The little girls are a delight and the reflections excellent. Well done.
Jayne

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